This is a blog hop created by the lovely
KERRIANNE COOMBES where participants post one paragraph from a WIP or finished book for all to see. For the entire list of participants click on Kerrianne's link above. My paragraph is from my soon to be released novella, Valkyrie Slumbering:
Grinding my teeth, I block out their voices. Even a moment is too much to forget myself. I tug the hair back over my ear, concealing it. As I empty the coins into my pouch and return the bowl to my pack I notice a man from the audience lingering. Only one. Not much of a surprise considering the mistake I just made. Although, even after revealing what I am, the type I hunt would linger about. With only one drawn in, it appears I have chosen the wrong town.
I hope you enjoyed the sneak peek, don't forget to check out the others at
this link!
Great hook!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lacie!
DeleteOh, I definitely want more! A fabulous hook! :)
ReplyDeleteMission accomplished! LOL, thanks Jessica!
DeleteVery intriguing. So many unanswered questions.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it caught your interest, thank you!
DeleteSo she's using herself as bait? That is really a tease and I really want more. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteShe is indeed, on both counts. ;)
DeleteVery mysterious. I want to know what she is and why she's here. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteMysterious, I like that. Thank you Flossie!
DeleteOk, is she bait? Im hooked, i want more x
ReplyDeleteLOL! Excellent! Thanks Kerrian. ;)
DeleteBait? Great hook!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra, glad you liked it!
DeleteIntriguing hook!
ReplyDeleteThank you Layna!
Deleteooooooooh......VERY interesting! I'm quite curious about her mistakes...
ReplyDeleteThank you Colette!
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