Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Hump Day Hook


This is a blog hop created by the lovely KERRIANNE COOMBES where participants post one paragraph from a WIP or finished book for all to see. For the entire list of participants click on Kerrianne's link above. My paragraph is from my soon to be released novella, Valkyrie Slumbering:

     Grinding my teeth, I block out their voices. Even a moment is too much to forget myself. I tug the hair back over my ear, concealing it. As I empty the coins into my pouch and return the bowl to my pack I notice a man from the audience lingering. Only one. Not much of a surprise considering the mistake I just made. Although, even after revealing what I am, the type I hunt would linger about. With only one drawn in, it appears I have chosen the wrong town.

I hope you enjoyed the sneak peek, don't forget to check out the others at this link!



18 comments:

  1. Oh, I definitely want more! A fabulous hook! :)

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    1. Mission accomplished! LOL, thanks Jessica!

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  2. Very intriguing. So many unanswered questions.

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    1. I'm glad it caught your interest, thank you!

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  3. So she's using herself as bait? That is really a tease and I really want more. Great hook!

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  4. Very mysterious. I want to know what she is and why she's here. Great hook!

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    1. Mysterious, I like that. Thank you Flossie!

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  5. Ok, is she bait? Im hooked, i want more x

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  6. ooooooooh......VERY interesting! I'm quite curious about her mistakes...

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