“Let me buy ye
lunch then,” Grím suggests as he grasps my hand, slowing down my pace. His hand
encases mine completely. My first instinct is to yank away and be free of him,
but I stop at the last moment. His grip is light, and though his hand is rough,
callused from wielding a sword, it is gentle. In its own way, that is just as
scintillating as his probing tongue was a moment ago.
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Well! Sounds like she's living the dream! Lol
ReplyDeleteNot quite, but she's getting there. ;)
DeleteMmm, battle hardened hands Lovely.
ReplyDeleteI love his hands. Enticing language too-- and title. This promising to be an intriguing story!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I must admit, his hands are one of my favorite parts. But there are so many other wonderful parts too. ;)
DeleteEek! Why is she trying to get away from him then? I need more! :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! She is reluctant to give in, which makes it all the more fun.
DeleteThank you Lacie!
ReplyDeleteSounds like he's good with his hands! Nice snippet :)
ReplyDeleteUmmm, definitely. ;)
DeleteAww I loved this snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks hun!
DeleteYour snippet makes me want to know why she's avoiding him. Very nice hook!
ReplyDeleteExcellent, thanks!
DeleteMmm... I love it. That is all! ;-)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Thank you!
DeleteInteresting! I want to know more about this probing tongue...and why she wants to avoid him. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteGlad I piqued your interest!
DeleteI wonder why her first seaction is to try and avoid him.
ReplyDeleteWhy indeed? The mystery is so much fun. ;)
DeleteGreat hook. I just have to know more
ReplyDeleteI love that, thanks Naomi!
DeleteAww, fierce yet gentle. I love the combination!
ReplyDeleteGreat comparison between his hold and his kiss - fierce and gentle.
ReplyDeletewonder why she wants to yank away. I, too, like the fierce and gentle comparison. good hook. :) C.
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